Sacrificial Moment
Sacrificial MomentIn a sacrificial moment as it lay upon the altar while divine intervention was on its way,I paused to peek and ponder as I sought to seek and wonder of the kiss -- I laid upon your...
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A superb write Dan, that celebrates mystery of the mind and perhaps heart. The openinglines are so powerful...well done!!!SusanneThe Poet is always trying to explain the unexplainable. Dr. Alan Watts
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Thank you, Sus... This poem was inspired by the same circumstance as "Down the Corridor"... I am glad you like it.dan
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Dan, I love the style and rhythm of this poem. It rolls along so smoothly,ShelbyMetric feet with rhythmic beatwill keep in step with time,to make an imprint where they stepin lasting strands of...
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Thank you, Shelby and Iris, for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed it.dan
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such a class lyric this I don't know how you have got it like this Danth ! x Liz
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Danth, I am fast becoming one of your reader fans. The title for this write is awesome, and the wording of the poem is excellent.Wanda
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Congrats to you,too, Dan for the nomination! Well deservedShelbyMetric feet with rhythmic beatwill keep in step with time,to make an imprint where they stepin lasting strands of rhymeCheck my website...
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Don't know how I missed this one Dan..it is lovely..off to read "Down the Corridor". Congrats on the nom!Regards,Maryse
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Dan,What a curious contrast between the speaker's voice and the obvious yearning within! I love it. The internal rhymes, the fantastic rhythm - what isn't there to like? Congrats on the nom!Rich
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